User talk:AliceJones

Welcome!
Hello, AliceJones, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hello!
My name is Sherryruben! This should be a fun semester in SOC 3062! --Sherryruben (talk) 18:03, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

Phrasing
Hi! I'm the content expert for your course. I wanted to caution you about how you include content from other locations. I saw that you were inserting content in quotations as a quote, however the section in question was a series of bullet points. This makes it a bit awkward to include in this format, as quotes are typically used in paragraphs rather than in bullet points. I've re-written the section, but just be careful about this since it comes across a little awkward. You didn't do anything wrong (I would recommend stating where a quote comes from in the sentence, however, just to make sure all of the bases are covered with attribution), I'm more just saying this for stylistic reasons. Cheers! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:46, 18 May 2017 (UTC)