User talk:Alicevoe/sandbox/draft

Peer Review Therearenogods (talk) 12:33, 1 November 2018 (UTC) The one and only source is shown for a definition, unfortunately, and is not for the information on the topic at hand but a definition for a subject related to the page. The second paragraph doesn't have enough explanation for the topic and has no references.

Peer Review - Pesansky
Your source looks really reliable and a good source to use. One of the biggest things that caught my attention was where you talk about how a Trojan Horse gives you malicious content, what specifically is this. My first question when reading this was is malicious content a virus or is it inappropriate content, etc.? Keep your content written in one tense, right now there is some present tense and some past tense. If you want to talk about something that happened in the past then make sure you mention when in the past you are talking about.

Winnerevu's Comments on Your Wonderful Work
I like the mention of the trojan horse reference because I didn't know that was a "backdoor key", but I feel like you can elaborate on that. I feel like you could incorporate more sources *cough cough* you only have 1 *cough cough*. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winnerevu (talk • contribs) 12:30, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review - rosmeryl
I like the definition and the background information on what a backdoor key is but there is not enough sources. In order to support your claim about the devices being vulnerable you could find a source that talks about it. You just need more sources and to go into depth a bit more. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rosmeryl (talk • contribs) 20:11, 1 November 2018 (UTC)