User talk:AliciaJurado/sandbox

Prof. D. Feedback: I love the angle that you're taking. Such a timely and important contribution. I can tell you've done a great deal of work on this. I am a little concerned that your portion may be flagged for not being encyclopedic in style, but we can fix this if we do citations and some mild re-phrasing, I think. Ideally, citations come after each sentence that is relevant, repeating as necessary. Let me know if you have questions on this. The wikipedia citation manager is really easy, also here's the link to the training module for it https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students/sources. You might notice that near-constant citation is a wikipedia norm in the sense that we need to verify everything. So I'm just a little nervous to not be seeing this yet. Let me know if you want to discuss tone and citations, I'm happy to assist. --T. Danylevich (talk) 03:50, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Cate's Peer Review on Environmental Injustice Section:

First of all I think that this topic is really interesting to include and extremely relevant in today's society! Within the topic of climate change and environmental crisis there is a lot of conflicting views and solutions but I think this content was able to show how including women and solving some of these injustices can lead to a better future. In terms of the content in the google document, I think that the content could be more neutral.I am not sure if when you include the content into the wikipedia that you are going to be adding sources to the first paragraph but I would suggest doing so. For example, in the second paragraph you included the information and where you got it from, CNN and the UN climate chief. When you stated that women are often left out of the decision making in terms of climate talks and solutions I would consider placing the sources of where you got that from and for some other points so it came from a source and not an opinion. Maybe you could consider including an example from a specific country or place in the world where women are facing climate change and injustices that come with pollution or water etc. I think it is good that you included all the different parts of the world where women are put in charge of collecting natural resources, but maybe you can include a more specific example. The sources that you have on your sandbox all look really good and reliable. Good job!