User talk:Alinarez/sandbox/Madonna of the Pomegranate

I think this is a really good start to your article, especially based on what you started with! I think something that would help the article greatly, however, is a quick lead section to help introduce the reader to the work; something quick and easy to understand, without overexplaining anything or repeating information that will be found in the body of your work. My biggest concern with the article is the "History" section. I think it would be best to have more history on the painting itself rather than Botticelli as an artist. When people come to this article, they're reading it to understand the painting, not really to learn more about its artist. Since you already have Botticelli hyperlinked, it allows the reader to go to the specific Wikipedia page on Botticelli, which suffices for the most part. A short description is helpful, but I'd maintain the history portion for history of the painting instead. Other than that, I think this is a really solid foundation for your article; it's well-structured, balanced, and neutral. All of your sources work and seem solid, although I would suggest using more scholarly journals and articles. Magzy2001 (talk) 19:44, 21 October 2020 (UTC)