User talk:Alinett/sandbox


 * Hi, how are you doing today? Bulldogs2021 (talk) 18:42, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

Hey

This shows a lot of work leading up to your first draft. I would just note that this group was not even convinced at that point there was an infectious agent, but that is a minor quibble. Keep up the good workRJBazell (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 20:52, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review — I think this shows a lot of really interesting ideas! I guess the only thing to do from here on would just be to flesh it out into the article. Mariposa678 (talk) 17:17, 9 November 2017 (UTC)

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You have a lot of great information. All your sections definitely compliment each other to create a good and cohesive article. The only thing would be to make sure you have all you sources in check!Lk031 (talk) 01:30, 10 November 2017 (UTC)

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You have a great first draft! The only thing I would suggest is that near the end of the first section, be be careful with your tone so it doesn't sound like an opinion, but more factual/informative instead. But overall, you have a lot of information and include many different/important section which makes for a well-written comprehensive article. Studenta1 (talk) 04:49, 14 November 2017 (UTC)