User talk:Alison McAvoy

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In addition, your edits appeared to be excessively promotional, and lacking in independent reliable sources to back up the accuracy and encyclopedic significance of the content. (The Sunday Times article you cited might qualify, except that it appears to be primarily focused on his daughter, not him.) Please note that Wikipedia is not a repository for resumes.--Arxiloxos (talk) 17:10, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
 * I have again reverted your changes, for the same reason Arxiloxos gives above. You must rely on properly sourced material when writing at Wikipedia, especially in the case of biographies of living people, and you must write in a neutral tone that does not appear to promote the subject.  WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 14:47, 27 February 2013 (UTC)