User talk:Aliyahm/Chelsea cutler/BettyChipman Peer Review

Hello! I reviewed your article and I think you found a lot of great information. I also think you did a great job linking other articles that are used. That is very helpful for someone that may not know what is being referenced. All your links work and your sources are all reliable and legitimate to me. I think you could separate the chunk of information that you have into separate sections. The beginning when you are talking about her early life and then you get more into her career towards the end of the paragraph. Those could be two different sections and that will help organize it better. I think you are off to a great start and and have a lot fo good quality information. I think separating the sections will also help with finding more research so that you are more zoned in on finding articles for each section rather than just Cutler as a whole. Great article start though. Could use more pictures but again I know you are still researching and thats more towards the end. BettyChipman (talk) 18:07, 31 January 2020 (UTC)Betty Chipman