User talk:Aliyahz/sandbox

Aliyahz, I think you are off to a great start to contribute to this article! I like that you chose a section that was very sparse to add to; I think that will give you a lot of opportunity to add new and updated information. As for what you have drafted so far, it is neutral and seems very organized. I would suggest adding the citations wherever you plan to use them. I also think there are other places you could add new info, like the treatment section and even history! Maybe you could include more about the pediatrician who first described the disease since that is mentioned in the lead? Madihuddleston (talk) 18:18, 17 February 2019 (UTC)

Aliyahz Peer Review
Before looking at your edits, I looked at the article and noticed that various sections are underrepresented. I like the edits you have made for the diagnosis section. I also noticed that you mentioned you were going to work on the intro, the word “varied” is used quite often, maybe use another word for it if it is needed again. Lastly, make sure to add your citations. Good job on your editing!Kwhitlow2413 (talk) 02:55, 18 February 2019 (UTC)