User talk:Allen150/sandbox

Allen's Peer Review
This is a great first draft. There are a few grammatical and wording errors that could be fixed for example, the first sentence should say " After experiencing 36 years of war, Guatemala has been transitioning to become a more stable and established country." Make sure you proofread and read your work aloud so you can see how your sentences flow together and to see if there can be a better way to word your sentences. Also make sure you add commas in the appropriate places for example "While Guatemala was...corruption, it was discovered...". Overall great stuff.