User talk:AllenCamp28

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Hello, AllenCamp28, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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November 2023
Please see MOS:NOTETHAT and MOS:YOU and MOS:CONTRACTION. Wikipedia doesn't write in anything like the style you're trying to use here, and even aside from those issues, the amount of material you added seems much more wordy than neccessary to convey the actually encyclopedic information. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼  21:13, 16 November 2023 (UTC)