User talk:Allenm720

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Your edits to Sudden infant death syndrome
Hi! I have reverted your edit to Sudden infant death syndrome, because the way it was presented was not really the way an article needs to be written. I would suggest that it would be better to list the suggested links, and recite the reference the links were stated in. However, please could you make sure it is with a neutral point of view. The topic is a very sensitive one, and it is very easy (rightly or wrongly) to get set in making sure a certain opinion is made.

I'm probably not making myself very clear - hopefully this example will make it clearer:

Statement A - "The world is round, not flat, despite what some people say."

Statement B - "Studies of the movement of the stars and planets have shown that the world is round (reference). However, there are organisations that exist that still maintain that the world is flat (reference).  This has led to a certain amount of ridicule by those who take the more widely held belief (reference)"

Both state the same thing, but statement B is more in line with what Wikipedia stands for.

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to leave me a question on my talk page. StephenBuxton (talk) 17:08, 10 January 2008 (UTC)