User talk:Allifeig/sandbox

Hey Alli! Great job! Here is my peer review for you:

Positives: 1. Overall, I think that you provided a comprehensive description of the sadistic personality. You and your partner addressed various angles, and answered a lot of questions a searcher may have about it. 2. I think you did a nice job explaining that it is a disorder that is often co-morbid with other disorders, and the addition/removal of the disorder from the DSM (because both of these things could be confusing) 3. The subtype section is very helpful, and is quality extra information about the disorder.

Improvements: 1. Under the definition section, you mention the opponent-process theory. Can you please elaborate on this? 2. Perhaps the Familial section title should be changed to Gender/Familial patterns? 3. The characteristics section and the personality section seem to have similar information, perhaps they could be combined into one section?

Good luck and again great job, see you in class tomorrow!