User talk:Allmightyjonny

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Holstein Kiel
A couple of points with respect to your recent edits to this article.

First off, while your edits are okay, its clear that English is not your first language. You need some help from someone who's English is a little more polished.

Second, its not necessary to repeat every variation of the team's name throughout the article. It's poor writing style and does not read well. The full form of the team name usually appears in the info box, while the introductory paragraph most often uses the name of the article.

I will be copy editing the article for English and general readability and leave as many of your additions as possible intact. Wiggy! (talk) 00:01, 13 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your help and tips --Allmightyjonny (talk) 22:57, 15 July 2009 (UTC)