User talk:Allycoughlan/sandbox

Peer review: The changes you've made are good. Particularly strengthening the opening section and of course the citation additions. The main revision I see potential for when I look over this is under the "Ideology" section. It is pretty short for one of the most important sections in the article. You could go more into depth with the already presented subjects or take more from the section as it stands on Wikipedia currently. Also, how did this ideology come about from the harsher versions of communism at the time? Maybe there could be a specific section on implementation of the ideology domestically. Lvcongo (talk) 16:17, 15 March 2019 (UTC)

The timeline given in the article seems very vague and confusing. If possible, I suggest to see if you can create a more clear time line for the basics of the article. Some of the information currently in the article causes other information currently in the article to become unclear--the same goes for information in your sandbox. I suggest to see if you can coincide information between both pages. Samtree121 (talk) 16:24, 15 March 2019 (UTC)