User talk:Allylynch1/Focus group/TeresaVarrialeGonzalez Peer Review

Hi Allyson, I was not able to understand if someone added new content to this article. However, I would suggest to: 1)expand the history section and add a new section on significant contributions to this topic. 2) Add the resources you included in the paper 3) Add a section based on the key terms you identified in your paper.

Teresa