User talk:Almaaguilarpdx13/sandbox

Article draft feedback
You've worked some good information in here! The expansion of parent/child and workplace examples/definitions in particular seem like strong additions to the existing article. As you continue improving on and revising this, some things to keep in mind are:
 * Some of the information in the romantic abuse section in particular is essentially paraphrasing what's already in the existing Wikipedia article. Unless you have a strong reason (misinformation, correcting spelling, that kind of thing) to change previous editors' work, I would encourage you to instead focus on adding to (rather than changing) what is already in the article.
 * For the parent/child and workplace sections, some of the new sources you're working with look excellent. The one about psychopathy, though, doesn't seem to mention narcissism or narcissistic abuse at all, so is a difficult source to point to for this topic as it doesn't quite support claims about your article's topic
 * In the lead paragraph, you will want to cut the sentences explaining what research does or doesn't exist, as these don't fit the tone or purpose of an encyclopedia article. Similarly, any language like "as formerly discussed in the previous section" also doesn't fit the tone of this kind of writing.
 * I think my biggest additional note is to make sure the material you are adding is speaking directly to the topic (narcissistic abuse can take the form or workplace bullying, but the broader conversation about workplace bullying belongs in a different article) and to be careful to not conflate narcissism, sociopathy, and psychopathy.

I hope this helps some! I look forward to reading your final article! Nicoleccc (talk) 17:38, 7 August 2019 (UTC)