User talk:Alokshooter

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Reference errors on 2 April
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Baldev Singh Mann
Hello, I have tried to help you edit your article on Baldev Singh Mann by doing some major copy-editing. This meant cutting out a lot of irrelevant text and trying to find the key 'facts' about him. Many of these 'facts' still remain unsupported by references, so I have added 'citation needed' where this is most important. It is still in a very rough state, but I've tried to let the key facts about him shine through the very complex text, much of which repeated itself, I'm afraid.

I have left an explanatory note on the article's Talk page, too. I hope this helps - there is much guidance to be found on Wikipedia how to write an encyclopedic article - and key to this is 'Notability' and a 'Neutral point of view'. So do please read this article for guidance, and this article on Notability guidelines. I'm afraid your article has not shown much of either, so I wanted to assist you a little bit, if I could. Best wishes Parkywiki (talk) 18:29, 18 April 2016 (UTC)