User talk:AloofCanine72/How Human Infrastructure Impacts Birds’ Ecosystem/Eisha Afzal Peer Review

Peer Review
I liked the organization and structure of the new article. But I think that the lead section is not neutral and the wording makes it biased towards one side. One of the references does not show in the reference list. Edit the lead section (fix the tone). Eisha Afzal (talk) 20:44, 27 October 2022 (UTC)


 * I see it, thanks for the input AloofCanine72 (talk) 20:46, 27 October 2022 (UTC)