User talk:Alsanefa/sandbox

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Need summary and/or outline Wilkerma4 (talk) 18:20, 13 November 2017 (UTC)

Update: When you say Anthropology science do you mean Anthropology as a science or Anthropological science? Some of your wording I find a little confusing. Maybe make the sentences shorter and more straightforward. Are the references at the end of the paragraphs for the whole paragraph? Or just for the last sentence? More citations would make this clearer. Great start and a lot of good information. Wilkerma4 (talk) 16:29, 15 November 2017 (UTC)

Sufficient sources, but needs a reference section.