User talk:Alyeshi/sandbox

I really enjoyed reading your sandbox! I think you have added a lot more engaging material to the original Wiki page. I especially liked the additional history portion

Some minor suggestions: I think you should spell out Joint Area Security instead of leaving it as "JSA", just cause I think it's more of an acronym we use in class.

Under Common Themes: National Division, you wrote "These relationships are usually brotherly. The movies also tend to end with a tragic ending, usually involving the separation of the brotherly bond." I think "brotherly" is a little vague and could be elaborated more. I think you sort of did that in the sentence following it. Another suggestion is that you add an example of a "brotherly relationship".

When you get the chance, hyperlink terms such as "386 Generation" or other Korean Movie titles.

All in all, great work!!!

Thanks so much for the suggestions. Yes I will fix the JSA and add the hyperlink terms to all the necessary terms, thanks for the reminder. Yeah, my Common Themes section is really vague but I will definitely add examples to help and add more to it and add more information. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alyeshi (talk • contribs) 00:56, 30 November 2018 (UTC)