User talk:AlyssaB22/Deafness in Egypt/Rubymelman Peer Review

Lead: There is not an official lead yet, but I can see that you are going to add that in later.

Content: All content added is relevant to the main topic and appears to be up to date. The content definitely seems to address topics that aren't as widely represented. For example, early hearing detection and interventions in Egypt.

Tone and Balance: Content seems neutral, there are no biases or "I" statements. I don't think the topics represented are persuading the reader in anyway, the content simply states facts.

Organization: Content is easy to read with clear headings that divide sections by topic. There are some grammatical errors, like commas or apostrophe issues, but other than that, looks great!

Notability Requirements: Good amount of sources, all seem pretty reliable. The article links all of the sources as well, which is good.

Overall Thoughts: Overall, I think you did a great job! I feel like I learned a lot about Deafness in Egypt through what you've written so far. Everything was easy to understand and the resources provided seem reliable. There are a few grammatical errors, but that's an easy fix!