User talk:AlyssaBeavers/sandbox

Mengke's comments: I think you don't have to cite the journal after each disease only if they come from different sources. Based on rubrics provided by Dr. Comstock, we need at least 3 citation in our work, so you might need to search more sources and write more sentences. For example, you can extent how vitamin D affect T cell and NK cells.
 * Mengke's correct on the number of sources required. Great start on the Vitamin D section, but you should definitely pull more information from multiple sources.  Also try adding some links for words in your text to other wikipedia pages, this makes a great chain of information for readers to look up terms with which they may not be familiar.--Homming2 (talk) 04:54, 23 October 2017 (UTC)