User talk:AlyssaOmohundro/sandbox

I think your article is looking good. It has good structure and layout. It is very organized and you have all your sources to back up your information. There is a nice neutral tone throughout the article. I would suggest that you also add to the artworks why they were made or what the meaning is behind them. This will help with bulking up that part but also give readers some more information on why the artist made that work. Also don't forget to add a see also section. Overall your article has a nice flow to it and it's heading in the right direction.HelenaA12 (talk) 17:55, 22 February 2020 (UTC)