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I found a few grammar errors but other then that good work! Here's what i found under Self-Worth in Adolescents, peers needs an apostrophe. You start a sentence with "they" you might explain more. After themselves add a comma. I would change "off of others" to off other's.Mckenzie324 (talk) 17:57, 11 March 2019 (UTC)

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Excellent start! As McKenzie noted, you'll need to check for grammar errors. Also be sure you're summarizing your sources and not paraphrasing too closely. Your sources are all good.JAirhart 21:01, 12 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)

I find mainly grammar mistakes in your draft. some of the words you have in your drafting can be correlated back to another page that wikipedia already has set up that I would link to them, a few of them being Border line personality disorder, depression, and anxiety. Other than that great job!Ashton01 (talk) 02:10, 13 March 2019 (UTC)