User talk:Alyssadicker/sandbox

This is my sandbox Alyssadicker (talk) 18:38, 18 February 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
1. The article gives a lot of insight as to how to fix the article in its current conditions with some references that need to be updated, information that needs to be added and some examples of what to add to the article. Something that impressed me was that from Jaime's ideas she put her own personal contributions to the wikipedia article that is great because there is some work that can be edited that can be added to the article. Also it is clear to what references are not used correctly according to Alyssa's corrections. 2. In regards to adding to the article I think the personal contributions that Jaime made to the Wikipedia page would be a great addition to the entire page. Also the changes in references to the page made by Alyssa would make a great change to the article. Both of these additions would be great improvements because even though the article has a lot of information there is still a lot more that could be added to the sections that they have mentioned in the article. Also there are a lot of references that have not been fixed on the article. 3. The most important thing that the author can do to improve this article could be to make their own personal contributions onto the article. The current article has a lot of different information summarized, but adding their own additions can give a better direction on how the article should be read on Wikipedia.

Gerardo1006617 (talk) 04:16, 2 April 2018 (UTC)