User talk:Am.nalula/sandbox

Hey Anjelli! Your sandbox drafting looks great, I added a few suggestions, but other than that, it looks ready to put into the Wikipedia articles. The addition for Immigrant Health Care in the United States fits perfectly as another barrier to care. Also I like how you broke down the different components for the Cultural Competence in healthcare article, it'll really help enhance the small definition they have in the article now.Tbeglarian (talk) 20:42, 5 December 2019 (UTC) Oh also, one thing I would add is just to change the citations under the Healthy Migrant Theory section since they're still in MLA format.Tbeglarian (talk) 20:45, 5 December 2019 (UTC)

Michael S. Edits
Hi Anjelli,

The edits and additions you plan to make on the page are very substantial and the information is a great addition to the page!

I added on my edits (underlined). Overall I think the content is great and the wikipedia tone is there! I would just advice on looking through to check for run-on/longer than usual sentences. I've put on some edits for the ones that I found. I for some it'd be worth to consider breaking up/ shortening the sentences to convey ideas in a clearer way. I agree with Talia's edits as well so I think it's worth considering those. Overall looks great!

Good luck with the rest of the wiki process!

Msigua (talk) 08:02, 19 December 2019 (UTC)