User talk:AmadeusNYC/sandbox

Instructor comments
It may have been a little early (based on the timeline, among other reasons) to move your edits to Wikipedia mainspace. Your peer reviewer has made some good comments that should be incorporated; I agree that the studies are very specific. In responding to peer review and finalizing your edits, please don't expand the specific studies much further and try to expand the general description instead.

Elizabeth Linden Rahway (talk) 02:51, 27 November 2017 (UTC)