User talk:Amandacz/Wolffia

Egor's Review of Wolffia
Hi Amanda, My name is Egor and I am in the final year of my PhD studying the role that carbon plays in promoting phytoplankton growth and evolution. Nice work on your edits, you chose a very interesting organism! Here are my comments and suggestions:


 * The most important thing that needs to be addressed is your lack of sources. It is essential to put references to add credibility to your work. Most people, don't want to just take your word for it, and might also want a resource where they can get additional information. For example, your claim that Wolffia might be healthier than some Western diets may be a source of disagreement, so providing a literature source is essential. For the amount of information you have in this section, you would need a minimum of three sources, and probably more.
 * In the first paragraph, it would be nice if you could provide some examples of animals that use Wolffia for food.
 * You refer to duckweed, which is another Wikipedia page that you can link to, in case readers don't know what duckweed are.

Overall, great work! I hope this inspires you to do more Wikipedia edits.

Cheers,

Egor

--Ekatko1 (talk) 22:00, 30 April 2021 (UTC)