User talk:Amandahortonunm

Hi Amanda Horton Your addition to Pueblo revolt contained many good observations, but the style in which you wrote was not sufficiently encyclopedic and it suffered from a lack of references. Some hints is to not use "I" (I have found article) in an encyclopedic text, nor use phrasings such as "many feel", "opinions are out there". Also "an article states" is not a valid reference, a reference has to make the reader able to to find that article and check that the article represents what is written in it. Please try to rewrite yur contribution in a more encyclopedic style and then add it to the article. ·Maunus· ƛ · 19:21, 27 April 2009 (UTC)