User talk:Amandaluh/sandbox

13:21, 17 March 2016 (UTC)Alexisalex20 (talk)==Feedback== You did a great job organizing the three paragraphs into specific ideas, which made it enjoyable to read. I can easily recognize that each paragraph and point that you make is in relation to your main topic, which is ultimately the goal. I like how you mention the way people feel when someone is burdened by this feeling of invisibility. You well portray different perspectives relating to your topic. I cant really tell the perspective you are taking because you mostly just address the problem and don’t really go into any different thoughts. You do a great job with your citations and internal and external links. Every statement that you have used from an outside source looks to be cited correctly. You have all of your academic and popular sources cited. I like the topic that you have chosen because it is not something that I hear about often. It was very cool to read on something different that I have never really looked into before. Kpatt24 (talk) 13:19, 17 March 2016 (UTC) Alexisalex20 (talk) 13:21, 17 March 2016 (UTC)