User talk:Amarsha8/sandbox

Peer Review: I think that your article provided a good bit of information and had a great layout. To improve I would suggest adding two more sources so that you can have a range of information and maybe go into a little bit more detail on the topic. Maybe to allow yourself to have more sources of how about getting a personal view from someone within the group at the time. Zlee223 (talk) 03:31, 2 November 2018 (UTC)zlee223

Peer Review
Overall, your contribution is important to this topic. Your sections are written well and concise. I would only suggest adding more sources in order to have more information for the reader to gain insight into what happened. Such as maybe first-hand information for those who participated in the group. Besides that, the information you added drew me into this topic. Tmaldona (talk) 06:43, 6 November 2018 (UTC)