User talk:Amateragi/sandbox

Isaiah Peer Review
So far, things are looking really good on your article. It's definitely a relevant topic that I think will attract a good amount of viewers so just the topic itself is solid. Overall it's a smooth read. It's relatively easy to follow and it's not all over the place. While it's not a chronological writing, it flows from one topic to the other nicely. What stood out to me most was your ability to be neutral. This is one of the keys to a good Wikipedia article and you've done a good job on not using any favoring adjectives. Linking words to other existing pages is a good touch too, as it allows viewers to discover other pages that relate to your topic. You also did a good job of linking your sources to different phrases. It's a very good start and I'm interested to see what the final product is going to look like.