User talk:Amay1355/essay

Hey I've moved your essay to the proper place (user subpage). For more help see USERSubpages. Good luck and welcome to Wikipedia. JC7V (talk) 02:25, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer review by Germanboi87
I think you have done a great job with your reflective essay. It is very smooth and easy to read and it is interesting to see how you feel about Wikipedia and how it helped you to grow as a writer, student and person. You have clear sections and paragraphs and you answered the most important questions that were given by the guidelines. I also like that you included how many editors put a lot of work into improving Wikipedia, I think that is something that is often underestimated. I would have liked to read something about your contributions, what articles you edited and most importantly, what article you created. If you would add that, your essay would be perfect. Good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Germanboi87 (talk • contribs) 18:47, 24 November 2018 (UTC)

Essay Draft Evaluation
The essay's information is very sufficient for the topics we were to focus around. I feel like a lot of the information could be expanded a bit more and paragraphs like "Feedback" should be combined with the article you best see fit because there isn't enough context for it to stand out on its own. In the lead and and "Critiquing" section there are a minor spacing a grammar errors. The rest of the essay has only minor spelling errors. Great essay! Just read over it or have someone else read over it and show you the little stuff! (: LikesPickles (talk) 16:43, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

PeterYatesVT Peer Review
I think that you did good on writing your reflective essay. It is easy to read and the organization of it is very good. I like how you recommend others to take this class because I believe it would help people better understand Wikipedia and also help make it a better place. You are clear and concise on answering the questions presented. All in all I think you did a good job in writing the essay. PeterYatesVT (talk) 06:00, 10 December 2018 (UTC)