User talk:Amayarz/sandbox

Good job! Tcravy (talk) 14:31, 25 March 2019 (UTC)

Keep up the good work!Tcravy (talk) 14:33, 27 March 2019 (UTC)

Overall good job! Only criticisms are to use more sources and to add links to other Wikipedia pages. Dmastronardi (talk 18:40, 31 March 2019 (UTC)

I like your section a lot! Something minor is I think ladder should be latter. But otherwise good stuff. I agree that there should be more links, but it's good that you focused on the fairy tales. I think if you added dates or linked the time periods you mentioned it would improve context. Mlazarus14 (talk) 23:01, 31 March 2019 (UTC)

testDougsitt (talk) 15:08, 1 April 2019 (UTC)

I think adding a picture could be helpful to the readers.1oromo (talk) 14:08, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

I really like your work- I like how you get right to the point and are very objective in all of your sentences. The only criticism I have is to try to find some links to the fairy tales in the second section or maybe to explain what happens in those stories a little bit more. Otherwise, I think you did a great job! Montananelson (talk) 14:10, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Add some more detail about how romanticism plays a key role in the creation of fairy tales.Maddywright (talk) 14:12, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

This is a really good start to your wikipedia page. Your work seems to be driven by facts and less so by argument. I think one of the things you're missing is the time periods of the books you're discussing, that would add a lot more information. Larainal (talk) 14:13, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

I think for some sentences more specific dates could be added. When was the communist era in Russia? When was the space race? Also, the first sentence says, "throughout the country." Which country? Mtatherton18 (talk) 14:14, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

In the second paragraph, Joseph Stalin should not be "Joseph Stalin's" Sallyfried (talk) 14:16, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Your section is very well written and concise. My only suggestion is in your The Communist Effect section, you address two tale titles differently. You use both an italicized title and quotation marks: Anatoliy Mityaev's Grishka and the Astronaut[italicized]. Past tales such as Alexander Afanasyev's "The Midnight Dance". I think you have to use quotation marks for both titles of the tales. keep it consistent in the section. Rebxlee (talk) 14:20, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Did the fairy tales have images behind them that could be used? Inserting some image of the literature would be helpful to your page Charlieaabrams (talk) 14:31, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

How specifically did Stalin force writers to create certain fairy tales? Did he do it through law, or another way?Samwolff450 (talk) 14:35, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

You could include how fairy tales were spread, and you are missing some commas in your paragraphs. You have a good amount of sources and you include internal links, which is good. Caranlee (talk) 14:47, 3 April 2019 (UTC)