User talk:Amaziarz

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Peer Review #1
•Overall a great, interesting article •good lead section that includes main points of article •the "In Organizations" section was slightly confusing, particularly the "outcomes" section •consequentalist theory statement came out of nowhere and needs further explanation or introduction •"D.J. & Environment" should this be capped? I'd like to see consistency with the headings •"D.J. & wealth" needs to be somewhere else; keep all the "D.J. in ..." sections together and with similar headings •otherwise, excellent material! very balanced and neutral content Sjaberman (talk) 00:57, 13 April 2016 (UTC)