User talk:Amechifrank/sandbox

Peer Review by Brandon
I think this would be a great article to add to Wikipedia. I'm not sure exactly what ideas you have for this article, but what I thought of was that you could possibly add some sections on the different ways that technology has changed our forms of communication, how technology has changed what jobs are now available, and these are just a couple of suggestions I believe could work. I'm really excited to see what you do because, like I've already said, I think this is an article that could be really useful and one that has a lot of potential. Randoelin11 (talk) 03:23, 1 July 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review by Heather
Hey, Amechi! So far so good on the article. I think this was a great idea, especially adding the colleges and universities. I have a few ideas for more things you could add to this article. You could add the major employers of the area (Robins Air Force Base, Geico, etc.), major events that happen in this area (Perry hosts multiple horse shows and the Georgia National Fair), and famous people from Middle Georgia (Betty Cantrell, the Allman Brothers, Randy Crawford). Hthrxlynn (talk) 23:59, 7 July 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review by Ashley
I like that you're approaching this mainly from a geographic and cultural standpoint, and I think the article could definitely benefit from a "points of interest" section or like Heather said, a major events section. I know that the article is still in progress, but I would also make some changes to the formatting. The information is so good, but it kind of bogs down the lead section. Maybe give the groupings that you've listed their own section in the article? Those are my main critiques, as the sources are solid and the information is being built up well.Edwardsnmac (talk) 16:06, 12 July 2018 (UTC)

review response
Thank you, Ashley, I'm definitely working on the points of interest section, and going to add a section for Demographics in the area.Amechifrank (talk) 19:08, 13 July 2018 (UTC)
 * What article is everyone talking about? Curiously, there is no mention of it at all. -Grlucas (talk) 13:33, 21 July 2018 (UTC)