User talk:Ameliadandrea/sandbox

1 . First, what does the article-draft do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way? The article edit does well in explaining the American Dairy Association, very thorough and what they do, and also the national fair council

2. Are there sections in the article that seem unnecessary? Is anything off-topic? no there is good amount of information of how the national dairy council works and what the website is about

3. Does the article focus too much on negative or positive information? Explain. No, remains neutral and explains factual health benefits of dairy of what are included under the National Dairy councils website

Remember, neutral doesn't mean "the best positive light" or "the worst, most critical light." It means a clear reflection of various aspects of a topic.

4. Does the article draw conclusions or try to convince the reader to accept one particular point of view?Are most statements in the article connected to a reliable source, such as textbooks and journal articles? Or do they rely on blogs or self-published authors? no the article does not try to convince the reader to accept one particular point of view 5. Are there any changes you would suggest the author apply to the article? Why? can include more information about different types of dairy products and how they can be used

6. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know! no

7. Lijia HernandezLijiaH (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 15:46, 28 October 2019 (UTC)