User talk:Ami Ambu/sandbox

Momo's Peer Review:

Hi Ami, nice start to your article edits! I had a feeling that you are still in the editing process, so most of my suggestions I'm sure you're already working on yourself.

In bold are the wording choices/points of clarification I suggest could be edited for each section:

Place-Based Workforce Development and Sector-based Workforce Development Their strength in providing access to holistic services (especially to address basic social service needs) is great for getting folks into jobs quickly. '''great how? as in efficacious?''' Because they are focused on improving employment for individuals in a specific geographic area, place-based workforce development programs can also help address other central concerns in the region. What are the central concerns?

Social Impact vs. Social enterprise 'Are sustainable.' 'Earned income from sales is reinvested in their mission.' 'Are scalable.' I think you'll make these into clear sentences later, haha, but I had to mention it in my review. They look for companies that are doing good. (social good, wealth accumulation, etc.?)

Sumomox4nouchi (talk) 21:22, 31 October 2018 (UTC)sumomox4nouchi (Momo)

Peer Review/Edit - Momo Gomes
Momo's Peer Review:

Hi Ami, nice start to your article edits! I had a feeling that you are still in the editing process, so most of my suggestions I'm sure you're already working on yourself.

In bold are the wording choices/points of clarification I suggest could be edited for each section:

Place-Based Workforce Development and Sector-based Workforce Development Their strength in providing access to holistic services (especially to address basic social service needs) is great for getting folks into jobs quickly. great how? as in efficacious? Because they are focused on improving employment for individuals in a specific geographic area, place-based workforce development programs can also help address other central concerns in the region. What are the central concerns?

Social Impact vs. Social enterprise 'Are sustainable.' 'Earned income from sales is reinvested in their mission.' 'Are scalable.' I think you'll make these into clear sentences later, haha, but I had to mention it in my review. They look for companies that are doing good. (social good, wealth accumulation, etc.?)

Response: Thank you so much for the Peer Review Momo, I really appreciate it. I will definitely continue to elaborate on the concepts that I have used in order for the reader to gain a better understanding of the ideas. I will work on defining key concepts that are not already covered on the main wiki pages as well. Your advice is extremely helpful! Thank you. Ami