User talk:Amichevrolet

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Peer Feedback
Hello,

Your article is very well-detailed, especially the lead paragraph and the Career section. I could tell that this filmmaker was thoroughly researched because the article provides lots of useful information on her life and career. The article is also very well-written with good sources to back up the information. However, I would read it through and watch out for run-on sentences. For my direct contribution, I have taken the time to edit a few sentences to make the article read smoother. Also, I would add citations in-text where they are needed, especially in the Representation of Women and Islam section.

My other major critique is the organization of the page. Film analysis sections such as the Bab al-sama' maftooh and Keïd Ensa should be under the Filmography header. Filmography should also be under the Career header. I would also recommend separating the different career paths Benlyazid has taken in the Career section. For example, don't switch back and forth between discussing her filmmaking and her journalism. Besides these few critiques, the article is very well done and provides a lot of valuable information.

Thestrongestonehere (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2019 (UTC)Thestrongestonehere

Peer Review: Farida Benlyazid

 * Citations go after the period, unless in the middle of a sentence
 * Instead of putting multiple citations side by side like this, try and put them more directly where you reference that information in the text.
 * Needs more citation throughout - it also says (citation needed) especially "Representation of Women and Islam"
 * Filmography could be turned a table with role, year and film as the categories
 * I think finding my sources for your Analysis' of the films would be beneficial so it sounds less like a personal essay

Still a lot of great content! Nice and throughout and I like how you include the analysis and film summaries.