User talk:Amiji.a/sandbox

What does the article (or section) do well? I liked the inclusion of contact information, the sectioning of the article works really well, overall it's a very thorough and detailed summary of everything important What changes would you suggest overall? maybe the lists of diagnoses and stuff are not necessary but including them does not take away from the article so it's up to you, I would include more pictures of the people and places so its easier to take in all the information stated What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? there are a few typos here and there that just proofreading once over would help Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know! I am going to look back at my own to see if I can include more sectioning to break up the article better Sr183155 (talk) 15:35, 28 February 2020 (UTC)Ruchi

Feedback: Very advanced and professional article. Information is well-organized and articulated. Can you briefly explain what "low health literacy" is and why it is barrier in healthcare? Could you also explain what lead to the inception of BHCHP's transgender program? What gaps in healthcare did it fill?VictorSilva9 (talk) 15:43, 28 February 2020 (UTC)VictorSilva9

Amiji.a (talk) 16:00, 28 February 2020 (UTC)To Do List: - Include pictures of places BHCHP targets such as Jean Yawkey Place - Proofread over once - Define low health literacy and why it is a barrier to healthcare? - Explain the inception of the Transgender Program. What gaps in healthcare did it fill?