User talk:Amilon3/sandbox

-“(i.e., carrots, bananas, oysters, and the like)” take out the “and the like”

-Everything you’ve added sounds great, not sure if there are any more gaps to fill since it seems the entire wiki page on Aphrodisiacs seems to be the information you have added

-Most paragraphs flow very well and all statements seem to be sourced

-the only thing that could really improve the article would be pictures to go along with the aphrodisiacs, although you have th4e wiki links just some pictures to make the wiki page more appealing

-secondary sources look good

-overall looks great and I don't have many suggestions, grammar and sentence flow is good and everything is sourced

-ill keep looking over it to see if anything needs some work — Preceding unsigned comment added by Juliahonda (talk • contribs) 06:06, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

Hello! You did a great job on this page. You have added a lot of content, and I don't see any clear gaps. As such, I don't have a lot to suggest here either.
 * 1. You mention the Bufo Toad can have a negative impact on heart rate. Perhaps you can elaborate on that? (inconsistent rate or too fast?)
 * 2. Maybe my knowledge is not sufficient here, but I'm wondering why marijuana is listed as a synthetic(page)/unnatural(sandbox) aphrodisiac.
 * 3. As the other reviewer mentioned, you can add some pictures for the different types of aphrodisiacs. You can probably even reuse pictures from their respective main wiki pages.
 * Martijn Koning IIT (talk) 01:29, 7 November 2019 (UTC)

Final wiki contribution comments: Overall great content added, very well researched. There were a few small grammatical issues throughout that I edited directly in your page. There were also a few unclear statements, and one that I didn't know how to edit (without looking up the studies) like "In addition, cultural influence in appropriate sexual behavior from male and females also play a part in the research gap". But great job overall. Nlegate (talk) 22:22, 9 December 2019 (UTC)