User talk:Amiratotah/Rose Frank (cornhusk weaver)/Jonpark47 Peer Review

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amiratotah/sandbox Amiratotah's article on Rose Frank has a well-constructed lead. It was clear to understand the history of Frank and her early life. The overall content includes useful information about Frank and her artworks. One thing the user could have added was information about her collections. It was blank and did not show where any of her artworks were publically displayed. All the information presented is unbiased and gives readers a clear insight into Frank's life. The user includes useful sources that he cited that allow readers to easily look up the sources. Another thing I liked is that the user added some terms and translated it into modern English, which provides users with more information about Frank and her life. The user could have added some pictures so that the entire article isn't just text. Overall, the user did a great job on their essay with just a few minor errors. The user's information about Frank is clear and concise and readers are able to easily follow along.

Jonpark47 (talk) 03:39, 25 February 2020 (UTC) @Jonpark47