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Article Evaluation
-Juvenile Delinquency article -4 WikiProjects connected -C-class and Start-class ratings--Amjfish (talk) 23:03, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Article Evaluation

I agree with "the mere idea of becoming fat has caused many women to develop eating disorders..." because of our societies beauty paradigm. Females of all ages feel pressured to follow these guidelines to feel accepted in the society. With the health risks that comes along with this, they tend to ignore just to keep up with appearance. Your points are well thought out, just make sure they are not directly from the article, and are put in your own words to avoid plagiarism or copying. Bwolfson95 (talk) 21:33, 1 March 2018 (UTC)