User talk:Amodiok/sandbox

Hi sam and katie!

I realized I already posted on sam's page and then went to yours and its a little different

this is what I put on sam's page:

3 positives: 1. Very good, accurate information and good length 2. The paragraph about the id, ego, and superego is very well written and informative relating to dreams. 3. The 5 processes in the Interpretation section are interesting and seem very fit for Freud.

things to work on: 1. Titles need to be italicized 2. Try to put intro in more easily understood terms. It seems to run on and your topic is not clearly defined either, try to be more direct. 3. Clarify where the definitions come from, i.e. the manifest content and latent content make up the x part of Freud's theory. 4. The paragraph about dream symbols under Freud’s 5 processes is very jumbled and missing punctuation so it’s very confusing. The topic of this paragraph is interesting so it might be worthwhile to expand on.

But your organizations of the 5 processes and symbols is much better on this one, but is the paragraph before your intro just your own notes about the references?

Good job! -Claire and Emily

Claireasmith619 (talk) 03:06, 19 November 2012 (UTC)