User talk:Amritdhillon93/sandbox

Peer Review
REPOST: "Hi. Your article could use some organization. The information that is presented seems to jump from topic to topic without any context. There are also quite a number of typos that need to be proofread more carefully. When you cite your sources, make sure to use the proper Wikipedia reference format and only cite once at the end of the information you retrieved from another source. There are some parts in your article that you could link to other Wikipedia articles. Overall, the information is interesting; I think you did a great job at mentioning potential applications of the papers you read, but there are some things you mention that could include more detail. Idychang (talk) 23:15, 19 November 2016 (UTC)" Idychang (talk) 06:08, 1 December 2016 (UTC)