User talk:AmsNU2015

Summary
The author writes to contribute to the “EROI” Wikipedia page. The contributing material includes information about cutoffs and improving the readability of the page. The author also intends to go into further detail regarding fossil fuels and energy.

Major Points
•I would try to avoid words like “lastly”, as they tend to sound like arguments or supporting evidence being listed, and that can take away from the NPOV mandate.

Minor Points
•The sources used in the Author’s work are notable and seem to provide a number of reliable reference points

•Writing is generally neutral and does not impose any argument. Should be good to go on this front! Kk0061 (talk) 00:54, 23 November 2015 (UTC)

NPOV
The author does a good job keeping NPOV throughout the article. In the “societal” section, I can see that the author had to put a lot of effort into keeping NPOV when talking about the Human Development Index.

Wiki Rules
The author seems to be following wiki code, as she demonstrated by posting on the talk page about reducing the technicality of the EROI page. Simple language is kept in mind quite well. Farmerleslie (talk) 01:52, 22 November 2015 (UTC)

I see you
Hi there! Mkh1206 (talk) 19:32, 7 October 2015 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, AmsNU2015, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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