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Article Evaluation: Medical entomology

Overall, this article is well written. It is concise and contains a lot of information, but doesn't say too much extra information that clogs the article. Something that distracted me in the article was the reference to the "three branches of the military." I feel this takes away from the main point of the article: medical entomology. Everything in the article is neutral and factual rather than someone's opinion. There are a couple links to other wikipedia pages that haven't been written at all, so these links could be taken out. The first citation is probably a credible source, but you have to pay for access to the original article, so it is virtually impossible for the normal public to access this. The other references have good links and are viewable to everyone. Most everything on this article's talk page is positive and everything noted seems to have been fixed in the article.

Amsmiley16 (talk) 19:11, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review from Riley Piek
I found this article well filled out in most places, with only early life, family, and perhaps some detail in what work Mary-Claire being the only things lacking. What you plan to add is well informative and would be a great addition to the article. There is a miss spelling at the end of the early life section, "Mary-Claire King was a university student when she accidentally discovered her Jewish ancestry.[7]" This may not be a mess spelling, but considering it says right be for this that she had to hide being jewish to get into a university, this suggests she did not know. Perhaps just a clarification could help. But that was the only real problem I could find through out what you plan to add and the article. Great job! Rspiek17 (talk) 02:27, 4 March 2019 (UTC)