User talk:Amy.E.Jones/sandbox


 * "Nalo Hopkinson’s first novel, Brown Girl in The Ring (1998), a novel published by Warner Aspect, is 256 pages of twists and turns filled with Afro-Caribbean culture that brings folklore and magical realism to life."


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 * "Nalo Hopkinson’s first novel, Brown Girl in The Ring (1998), is 256 pages of twists and turns filled with Afro-Caribbean culture that brings folklore and magical realism to life."
 * DylanRHaynes (talk) 00:40, 2 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "Since the selection, Hopkinson’s novel has received critical acclaim in the form of a Locus Award for Best First Novel"


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 * "Since the selection, Hopkinson’s novel has received critical acclaim in the form of a Locus Award for Best First Novel (date?)"
 * DylanRHaynes (talk) 00:40, 2 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "Hopkinson is of Jamaican descent and she grew up in Jamaica, Trinidad, Guyana, the United States, and Canada."


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 * "Hopkinson is of Jamaican descent and was raised in Jamaica, Trinidad, Guyana, the United States, and Canada."
 * DylanRHaynes (talk) 00:40, 2 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "The setting of Brown Girl in The Ring is not utopic in nature"


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 * "The setting of Brown Girl in The Ring is not utopic in nature"
 * DylanRHaynes (talk) 00:40, 2 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "While the elite and city officials have fled to the suburbs, children are left to fend for themselves and survive on the streets that are ruled by Rudy Sheldon and his posse of criminal thugs. "


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 * "While the elite and city officials have fled to the suburbs, children are left to fend for themselves and survive on the streets which are ruled by Rudy Sheldon and his posse of criminal thugs. "
 * DylanRHaynes (talk) 00:40, 2 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "Ti-Jeanne, the granddaughter of Gros-Jeanne, is struggling with very different problems then street survival. Having recently given birth to a baby boy, Ti-Jeanne has moved back in with her grandmother to care for her child as a single mother because the child’s father, Tony, suffers from addiction and is a member of the posse. "


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 * "Ti-Jeanne, the granddaughter of Gros-Jeanne, is struggling with very different problems than street survival. Having recently given birth to a baby boy, Ti-Jeanne is forced to move back in with her grandmother to care for her child as a single mother; the child’s father, Tony, suffers from addiction and is a member of the posse. "
 * DylanRHaynes (talk) 00:40, 2 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "Hopes of leaving his criminal life behind and reconnecting with his love, Ti-Jeanne, are shattered due to the threats from the posse leader looming over him. Tony must perform a horrific task of murder to obtain a heart to save the life of one of the city’s elite. The situation only gets worse when he involves his relationship with Ti- and Gros-Jeanne. "


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 * "Hopes of leaving his criminal life behind and reconnecting with his love, Ti-Jeanne, are shattered when threats from the posse leader begin to loom over him. Tony must perform a horrific murder in order to obtain a heart that will save the life of one of the city’s elite. The situation only gets worse when he involves his relationship with Ti- and Gros-Jeanne. (in the murder?)"
 * DylanRHaynes (talk) 00:40, 2 December 2013 (UTC)


 * "Themes of feminism in women of color and the use of magic, “Obeah,” or seer women are major themes throughout this novel. "


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 * "Themes of feminism in women of color and the use of magic, “Obeah,” or seer women are prevalent throughout this novel. "
 * DylanRHaynes (talk) 00:40, 2 December 2013 (UTC)

Also you will want to insert links to other pages throughout your work (as you said you would do tonight).

Looks good though!