User talk:AmyAtMOO

Mattdeshon (talk) 02:57, 14 December 2016 (UTC)

Hi Amy, happy to help out. I've had a look at your proposed updates, and have a couple of recommendations for you:


 * There is a lot of marketing speak in your Additional information section. Statements like 'aims to disrupt the trillion-dollar global print industry' are not really encyclopedic content, and will be flagged as spam.
 * Wikipedia is a reference tool. Think about presenting information in a way that an MBA student could learn about your company from an academic perspective.

Could you have a look at rewriting the paragraph with these things in mind?