User talk:Amym4oss/sandbox

Comments on the draft of your Wikipedia article will appear here. Hoopes (talk) 22:14, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

I think you've done an excellent job with this assignment. Please look at the "View history" tab in order to see the relatively minor changes that I've made, mostly in the way of adding additional hyperlinks to other Wikipedia articles and tightening up the language to improve clarity and reduce redundancy. I think you should consider adding the content you've created to the article for Pecos National Historical Park, perhaps to a section labeled "Archaeology at Pecos Pueblo". Hoopes (talk) 22:51, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

I do note that all of the references you've cited are to online sources. I think this article would benefit to the inclusions of citations and references representing Kidder's own relevant publications. That would help lead readers to the primary sources. Hoopes (talk) 22:53, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

- Let me know when you've read these comments. Hoopes (talk) 16:59, 16 May 2019 (UTC)